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Comment on Twilight by gregd

gregd — Wed, 25 Nov 2009 13:04:05 +0000

This essay does make sense. There is a introduction but not much of a conclusion. It is pretty good, it didn’t seem to be much of a book review. It also talks about how one character affected another character which is goo.d – Marcus

Comment on To Kill a Mockingbird by gregd

gregd — Wed, 25 Nov 2009 12:59:35 +0000

This essay did make sense and i didnt find any grammar or spelling mistakes.There is a good introduction and a conclusion but it seems like the conclusion was cut short but other than that it was good. It did not seem like a book review. It also discusses how one character effected another character in a positive way. This essay was good. – Marcus

Comment on Fahrenheit 451 by gregd

gregd — Wed, 25 Nov 2009 12:52:36 +0000

this essay is good but it seems to be a bit more like a book review than getting to the point. I didn’t find any spelling mistakes. There is both a conclusion and intruduction. Although it seemed like a book review a little bit, it eventually gets to the point and shows how one character affected another character in a positive way. – Marcus

Comment on Of Mice and Men by gregd

gregd — Wed, 25 Nov 2009 12:46:20 +0000

This is a real good essay, it has alot of good information to support why he was a character to influence another character. This essay does make sense. There is both a conclusion and introduction. The essay isn’t a book review and it talked a lot about how one character affected another. – Marcus

Comment on My Sister’s Keeper by dimitrik

dimitrik — Wed, 25 Nov 2009 12:45:50 +0000

I found this essay to be very good with no grammatical and spelling errors. I did not exactly see that there was a conclusion but there was an introduction. I think that this is the perfect balance between a story and book essay as it gives you a good overall summary of the story. It does show how a character positively affects the story.
-by Kastro

Comment on Fahrenheit 451 by reillyhanrahan

reillyhanrahan — Wed, 25 Nov 2009 12:45:29 +0000

The essay was very well organized and it didnt get off topic. It was well put together, and good wordchoice was used. It was very descriptive and had good sentence structure, but over all it was “okay.”
-Bill

Comment on Holes by bnewell

bnewell — Wed, 25 Nov 2009 12:45:26 +0000

This essay was well written and made sense. There was a good introduction and conclusion. It is not too much of a book review because most of the essay is about how Stanley helped and affected other characters. I do not see any spelling or grammar mistakes.
by Penelope

Comment on To Kill a Mockingbird by bnewell

bnewell — Wed, 25 Nov 2009 12:45:05 +0000

This book essay is very well written and its order makes sense. The introduction is really good. Your conclusion ends kind of quickly, but it still makes sense. At the beginning of the essay, it sounded like it was going to be too much of a book review, but it ended up being a good introduction and by the end, you know how the character affected other characters. I do not see any grammar or spelling mistakes. Great essay!
by Penelope

Comment on A Child Called It by mattschlefstein

mattschlefstein — Tue, 24 Nov 2009 14:18:53 +0000

This is a good essay but it has some mistakes.There is a introduction and conclusion paragraph.It staes some good examples of how the character affected other characters in a good way.

Comment on Twilight by dimitrik

dimitrik — Tue, 24 Nov 2009 14:17:10 +0000

I believe that this essay does make sense and contains an introduction but I don’t see a conclusion. I don’t think that this essay is too much of a book review and like how it is a summary. This essay does talk about how one character positively affects another within the story.
by Kastro